Tuesday 12 October 2010

Skul Fan-Fiction 14

                              Everything froze. Everything was stopped, even the bolt. Everything hinged on this. I wouldn't let this hit Nicolette. I did this and I can stop it. Feeling the power around me, gathering it into something I could use, let it completely envelop me. I tried to pull and disperse the Lightning but nothing happened except a few sparks shot out of it at then froze in time like everything else.
                             Wait . . . This shouldn't be happening. Lightning lasts just over a millisecond and it still hasn't reached Nicolette. I cautiously relaxed. Deep breaths . . . But no air came. I became aware of tingly sensation and I could feel a small drain on my powers. I looked around. Dragona was screaming but I couldn't see any flames. Everyone was staring at him, with hands out-stretched instinctively. Only Kallista was in a stance that seemed like she was about to use her powers, hand's cupped close to her chest, facing Dragona. I could see moisture in her palms already.
                            This feel's nice. I knew I should be panicked out off my mind but I felt like going to sleep right there and then. No!!!! I forced myself to think logically. I was suspended in the air and time was frozen. I couldn't fall or move around but I could still rotate and move my body. My body . . . I looked down and didn't see anything, no body in sight . I spun 360 degrees and still no body. Maybe I'm dead . . .  No panic.My senses were dulling. Relax and it will go away, that's all you have to do . . . 
                             I wish. That wasn't going to happen. Not a chance.This shouldn't be possible though . . . Nothing I could think off could explain this.I thought back to when that anger exploded. Sparks enveloped me . . . completely consumed me . . . . became me . . .
                              It hit me like a rock. I was the bolt headed for Nicolette. This was what it was to be a pure source of energy. It also made me realize that this wouldn't last forever, lightning lasted for a fraction of a second and I was that second. I looked over at Kallista , she had slightly more moisture formed in her hand and her hair  had barely moved in the breeze that I couldn't feel. Barely . . .
                             Now panic set it. I immediately tried to divert the Bolt from it's path and it did move but not the was I intended. A flash and the bolt was now so close to Nicolette that it almost touched off her. But a couple off forks were caught splitting of so the bolt was weakened. Still not weak enough for her to survive though. If I survive, I thought, I'm defiantly taking anger management classes . . Florence could join me . .ha ha . .
                            Calming down and focusing, I began preparing to try again.Doubts began to enter my head. What if it doesn't work?What if I die? What if SHE dies?  Meh ,I might as well try. Power coursed through me for a split second and I pushed outwards with every ounce of strength . I hit the ground hard. I couldn't even find the strength to open my eyes to see if I had succeeded . . .

7 comments:

  1. OMG! so cool! i like how you describe being in the second!

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  2. WOW!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AWESOME!!!!!!!
    What a great way of writing you have!!!! I never would have thought of something like that!!!!!
    Soooooooooooo coooooooooooooool!!!!!!!!!!
    I must have more! PLEASE LEO, DON'T KEEP ME WAITING!!!!!!!!!

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  3. OOOoooooOOOOOoooo!!!!!!!! I love the "I am the bolt" part, that is soooo cool!!!!!

    Dude you seriously have an amazing writing style!! as kallista said DONT KEEP US WAITING!!!

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  4. SOOOOO EPICA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GREAT WORK LEO!!!!!!!!


    I agree with kallista and necros! post MOAR!!!

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  5. COMPLETELY AWSOME!


    MOOORRREEE!!! please...

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  6. OMG!! AWSOME AWSOME AWSOME but...anger managment classes...you will pay for this *shakes fist and sharpening billy-rays nicked razor*

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