Wednesday 20 April 2011

Skul-Fan Fiction 22

                        My heart nearly exploded.  Her pleading eyes seemed to bore into my soul begging me not to leave.But I wasn't going to just let her die. What the hell is making her like this? I felt her forehead. It was hot and clammy. I'm no expert but I knew that was bad. She was beginning to writhe on the ground and I knew she couldn't breath properly. She was badly allergic to nuts and I had seen her like this when she had eaten a slice of a massive birthday cake that had hazelnut chocolate filling. I did warn her.
                       That must be it. I felt along the lining in her jacket trying to find he tiny vial of liquid to stop the reaction. I'd seen her pretend she was a vampire with it before to scare people off and she always wore the same Bespoke jacket. It was in my hand. I said a little prayer of thanks and another of pleas. Work! I jabbed it into her arm but I didn't have a clue if I had to find a special vein or something for it to work and I knew if you did it the completely wrong way it'd kill her.That would be really bad. It would be my fault.
                       I pressed down on the syringe not stopping praying for even a second, my eyes tightly shut. I heard a gasp but her breathing still wasn't back to normal. I forced myself to look and as I did tears began to flow down my face. She was still struggling but her eyes were open and she'd stopped struggling.She looked at me and a tiny smile appeared on her lips.
                      'You would think that I wouldn't have time to eat at a time like this wouldn't you . .',she stopped for a moment to try and catch her breath,' but I just couldn't resist that last brownie in the back of the car' Typical. I was laughing while crying and had a kind of an angry expression on my face which made her laugh but that wasn't good. In a few seconds she was panting again like she'd run a marathon and my face went deadly serious.'Rest'.Reason came over me again. I picked up the little almost empty little yellow tube.And in a flash I was beside Florence.
                     She reacted in a split-second and the tube was gone. The paste was already on Dragona and Nicolette before I could even speak. She gazed up at my stunned face. Then she uttered words that doomed  Kallista and Israel.' These are our friends. The other two aren't.' I could see in her eyes though that those words hurt her as much as it hurt Kallista and Israel.

7 comments:

  1. WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!! FANTASTIC!!! WOW! Your writing is so descriptive and AMAZING!! I love it! XDDDDD
    Thanks for posting again Leo! It does me good to read some of your awesome stories again!

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  2. LEO! You're back :D awesome writing here. Great work, keep it up!

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  3. WOOOOOTTTSSSSSS LEOOOOOO!

    YOUUUU HAAAVEEEE RETUUURRRNNNEEDD!

    lol, that is exactly what i would do leo! eat a brownie at the time of a crisis!

    I love the descriptions in your writing! amazing!

    Good to have ur stories back leo!

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  4. AWESOME LEO! Please don't kill Kallista or Israel though. EPIC STORY! I can't wait for more!

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  5. *sighs*
    Dragona my friend. I don't mind if I die.It's just a story. :)
    *hugs him*
    It will be ok.

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  6. For all those who do not know it yet, Kallista is in trouble. She has been told to stop visiting the blogs by her parents, and we need to help her. One of the reasons for this is that they thought she's a bad influence on us.

    GO to your blogs and post a plea to Kallista's parents to let her come on as she did before. Tell them what you think of her and tell them how great she is. Get all the blogs in Blogland posting some such as I have said. I hope they will see it. I don't know that they will, but all we can do is hope and post our thoughts of our dear friend Kallista Pendragon!

    I am doing a round trip and posting this comment on as many blogs as I can reach. But I need you to help. Write up a post, then copy and paste this comment to any blog that I have missed.

    I am sure that at least one time in the past we have been encouraged, complimented or helped out by Kallista. Now it's our turn to give back that favor.

    Once you have completed your post, head down to the Bio-Rama and post a link to it in the comments section of the latest post.


    Original comment by Skyril, edited quickly by Hellboy. Now let's freaking help Kallista.

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