I kinda knew what was happening this time so I focused on shooting over to Florence in a bolt but not hitting her.A flash and I was falling beside Florence. I reached out and grabbed her soaking wet cloak . I gathered sparks to lift me again but a rough pull of air caught me by surprise. A vacuum . . .Shit! We spun in the air and smacked onto the slanted roof of a semi-detached house.
I got my foot into the gutter but the rain was so heavy Florence slid off the roof. My wrist was wrapped in the folds of her cloak. She swung off the roof but was kept aloft but my arm. It twisted around and a snap came with agonizing pain. An unnatural gust of wind pushed my chest off the roof and I flipped around my supporting leg acting as a hinge. It got caught and with a scream my foot contorted backwards and snapped muscles, ligaments and bone.
The plastic gutter couldn't hold us both and fell away from the roof. We would have smacked into the driveway had Kallista not sprang down the road and caught us in a solid cloud of air. Kallista turned around to be hit in the face by an invisible fist. Nicolette was strolling down the street, laughing. She swung her fist again and Kallista stumbled back clutching her face like she'd been punched for real. Air fists . . Nicolette could never manage them before but the remnant enhanced her potential and she cackled as she swung again.
Kallista was ready this time and parried with a wall of air. They attacked each other ferociously. I dragged myself over to Florence. The pain from every movement was excruciating but she wasn't breathing. I pumped electricity into my good hand, thought Clear, and pressed it hard onto her chest. I though what would happen if I'd overdone it or if she'd need more power or if it was already too late Please,PLEASE work . .
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ReplyDeleteNNOOOOOO!!!!!
ReplyDelete:O OH NO ..... >:] hehehe i do enjoy being evil
ReplyDeletethis is emmence leo!
Slick!!!
ReplyDeleteIs Leo's power lightning???
this may seem weird but I wish i could be possed for 4 days hence forever I really enjoy being evil...
ReplyDeletecus im weird that way
yep ... icicles!!! >:]
ReplyDeleteYeah lightning and electricity and magnetism and wired electrical science stuff, . . . i'm a bit geeky like that. . .
ReplyDeleteI feel like killing someone .... *smiles evily at bolt*
ReplyDeleteHrmm...
ReplyDeleteI'll have a little competition on this blog:
WHO CAN GIVE ME A NAME THAT AMNUSES ME?!?!?
I will put up a 1st person post of FF and the person who wins shall be the main person!
nice nicolette i'll let you stab someone with icicles next one!!!
ReplyDeleteSmelma pits
ReplyDeletePat mahiney
that kind of thing?
10 secs left...
ReplyDeleteTouk yo mony
ReplyDelete1/2
ReplyDeleteLEO WINS!!!
ReplyDeleteSik maheadbe
ReplyDeleteYeah!!!! with which one?!?!!??
ReplyDeleteLeo, you'll be the main man in the next post!!!
ReplyDeleteI would engoy stabing someone withan icicle ... i hope they die ...
ReplyDeletesorry Im in an evil mood
Sik maheadbe
ReplyDeletesorry but i don't think they'll die . . . i MAY ave already killed off someone , , , ,
ReplyDeleteYES!!!! CAN'T WAIT!!!! when do you think you'll be writing it?!?!?!
ReplyDeleteOK...
ReplyDelete10 more seconds...
NOW!
CARA VAN
ReplyDeletenot really funny but hey I like caravans
ReplyDeletesing relbad
ReplyDeletehelen copter
ReplyDeletei freaken love to pendulum *raves to blood sugar*
ReplyDeletesoyo spitlots
ReplyDelete10 secs up!!!
ReplyDeleteEr...
Third place: Leo, Touk yo mony
Second: Nicolette: CARA VAN
1st...
Staben killmurre
ReplyDeleterob oto
ReplyDeleteLEO!!!!
ReplyDeleteSik Maheadbe
Wait, I've got a better idea...
ReplyDeleteI'LL WRITE A SERIES ABOUT EACH PERSON WHO LIKES ME!!!!!
Who likes me???
ReplyDeletemeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ReplyDeleteI love you the most!!!!!!! also I won!!!!! thats not fair!!! but i forgive you because you'e the most amazing talented LIKEABLE person i know in the whole wife world!!!!
ReplyDeletewife=wide
ReplyDelete*Looks behind self*
ReplyDeleteWho, me?
yes you!!!!! BYe Kallista!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteOK, 3 peole so far...
ReplyDeleteI'll have ot start writing...
Leo first, then Nic & Kall have a fight, see who is in the next series.
yes you silly conker
ReplyDelete*stabs kallista with a icicle*
ReplyDeleteI like you more than her *points to her dead body* :O who did that!!
yeah!!!!! woooooo!!!!! when will you write it???
ReplyDeleteyes Sarthaucus write your such a great writer it would be a shame for you to stop perminantly
ReplyDeleteI enjoy being possesed all the time ... i enjoy being evil >:]
ReplyDelete^^^ agred you to bolt!!!
ReplyDeleteI CAN'T i have to think of something . I think off stuff while lying in bed about to fall asleep. will have it up in 2 days time at the latest. also it's short because it's easier to read and write!!!! gotta go people keep commenting!!!! bye!!!!
ReplyDeletebyeee but you can forget me commenting *walks off*
ReplyDeleteim off to dereks
ReplyDeleteLeo, what does your guy wear???
ReplyDeleteI've started writing!!!
ReplyDeleteLEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteCome back!
Check Bio rama or look at the first page of comments on Dereks blog . if not just make it up but soory can't type it up gotta go bye!!!
ReplyDeleteback
ReplyDeletesquirrel tried to rape me
this is worse than the mummies
..........
um....lol...?
ReplyDeletehow in hells name did the subject get on to octopus raping?
...:/ you know what...don't even try and tell me...
So, first thing i want to say is THIS STORY IS GORRAM THRILLIN'! You are a master of your ways, Leo. A MASTER.
Eating crispy creams in the hot afternoon Australian sun with a bucket-load of awesome fan-fics...life doesn't get better than this :P
am i dead now???
ReplyDeletewow a lot of comments so i take it you dont want mine :D
http://florenceblackblogs.blogspot.com/2010/10/not-finished-yet-but-here-is-leo-sparks.html#comments
ReplyDeleteleo i posted it for you and you never looked...
LOL! yall insane! awesome story Leo!
ReplyDeleteCCCCOOOOLLLL!!!!
ReplyDeleteWait, i already said that didn't i?
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