Monday 18 October 2010

Skul Fan-Fiction 16

                                  I kinda knew what was happening this time so I focused on shooting over to Florence in a bolt but not hitting her.A flash and I was falling beside Florence. I reached out and grabbed her soaking wet cloak . I gathered sparks to lift me again but a rough pull of air caught me by surprise. A vacuum . . .Shit! We spun in the air and smacked onto the slanted roof of a semi-detached house.
                                  I got my foot into the gutter but the rain was so heavy Florence slid off the roof. My wrist was wrapped in the folds of her cloak. She swung off the roof but was kept aloft but my arm. It twisted around and a snap came with agonizing pain. An unnatural gust of wind pushed my chest off the roof and I flipped around my supporting leg acting as a hinge. It got caught and with a scream my foot contorted backwards and snapped muscles, ligaments and bone.
                                  The plastic gutter couldn't hold us both and fell away from the roof. We would have smacked into the driveway had Kallista not sprang down the road and caught us in a solid cloud of air. Kallista turned around to be hit in the face by an invisible fist. Nicolette was strolling down the street, laughing. She swung her fist again and Kallista stumbled back clutching her face like she'd been punched for real. Air fists . . Nicolette could never manage them before but the remnant enhanced her potential and she cackled as she swung again.
                                   Kallista was ready this time and parried with a wall of air. They attacked each other ferociously. I dragged myself over to Florence. The pain from every movement was excruciating but she wasn't breathing. I pumped electricity into my good hand, thought Clear, and pressed it hard onto her chest. I though what would happen if I'd overdone it or if she'd need more power or if it was already too late Please,PLEASE work . . 

80 comments:

  1. :O OH NO ..... >:] hehehe i do enjoy being evil

    this is emmence leo!

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  2. Slick!!!


    Is Leo's power lightning???

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  3. this may seem weird but I wish i could be possed for 4 days hence forever I really enjoy being evil...

    cus im weird that way

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  4. Yeah lightning and electricity and magnetism and wired electrical science stuff, . . . i'm a bit geeky like that. . .

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  5. I feel like killing someone .... *smiles evily at bolt*

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  6. Hrmm...


    I'll have a little competition on this blog:


    WHO CAN GIVE ME A NAME THAT AMNUSES ME?!?!?


    I will put up a 1st person post of FF and the person who wins shall be the main person!

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  7. nice nicolette i'll let you stab someone with icicles next one!!!

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  8. Smelma pits

    Pat mahiney

    that kind of thing?

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  9. AWESOME! Leo! You are an amazing writer!!!!!
    It's so intence!!!! (crap. can't spell right) Love the action!

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  10. Yeah!!!! with which one?!?!!??

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  11. Leo, you'll be the main man in the next post!!!

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  12. I would engoy stabing someone withan icicle ... i hope they die ...

    sorry Im in an evil mood

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  13. Noooooooooooooooooooo! SARTHACUS! I didn't know there was a contest!

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  14. Nicolette. If Leo agrees, you can kill off me....I'm in a bad mood now!

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  15. sorry but i don't think they'll die . . . i MAY ave already killed off someone , , , ,

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  16. YES!!!! CAN'T WAIT!!!! when do you think you'll be writing it?!?!?!

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  17. not really funny but hey I like caravans

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  18. SARTHACUS! I CAN"T THINK UNDER PRESSURE!!!!!

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  19. i freaken love to pendulum *raves to blood sugar*

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  20. 10 secs up!!!



    Er...


    Third place: Leo, Touk yo mony


    Second: Nicolette: CARA VAN



    1st...

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  21. Wait, I've got a better idea...


    I'LL WRITE A SERIES ABOUT EACH PERSON WHO LIKES ME!!!!!

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  22. I love you the most!!!!!!! also I won!!!!! thats not fair!!! but i forgive you because you'e the most amazing talented LIKEABLE person i know in the whole wife world!!!!

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  23. yes you!!!!! BYe Kallista!!!!!!

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  24. *comes back looking sheepish* Sorry folks. Went from being a drama queen to being a diva!
    ....and og corse I like ya, Sarthacus! Still gonna rub your head and create static electricity, though!!!

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  25. OK, 3 peole so far...


    I'll have ot start writing...


    Leo first, then Nic & Kall have a fight, see who is in the next series.

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  26. Dang. I can't spell. ....and fairs fair! Leo did win! ...and I like to read about his sparky power thingy.

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  27. It's been a while since you have last writen, Sarthacus! Would love to have another story soon!

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  28. ....silly conker....are you talking to me?????????????

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  29. *stabs kallista with a icicle*

    I like you more than her *points to her dead body* :O who did that!!

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  30. yeah!!!!! woooooo!!!!! when will you write it???

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  31. I seem to see a trend in these fanfic of Nicolette being possessed all the time....kinda funny when you think of it....

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  32. yes Sarthaucus write your such a great writer it would be a shame for you to stop perminantly

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  33. Ooooooooooooooooooooo........cold icecle!!!!!!!!!

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  34. I enjoy being possesed all the time ... i enjoy being evil >:]

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  35. LEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


































































    Thanks for posting another story.




























































    But it was to short.

























































    Write another one!

























































    NOW!

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  36. *sneaks up behind Nicolette and sticks a bad moustash on her then runs off*

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  37. I CAN'T i have to think of something . I think off stuff while lying in bed about to fall asleep. will have it up in 2 days time at the latest. also it's short because it's easier to read and write!!!! gotta go people keep commenting!!!! bye!!!!

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  38. byeee but you can forget me commenting *walks off*

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  39. *standing in the dark all alone wondering where everybody went*

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  40. LEO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!





    Come back!

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  41. Bolt. Check out his Bio on Bio Rama!

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  42. Check Bio rama or look at the first page of comments on Dereks blog . if not just make it up but soory can't type it up gotta go bye!!!

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  43. Now you know what it feels like when YOU leave, Sarthacus!!!!! :P

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  44. BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE LEOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!

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  45. back
































































    squirrel tried to rape me











































































































































    this is worse than the mummies



























































































































































































    ..........

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  46. *Tries to muffle laughter*
    OH MY GOSH, NICOLETTE! THAT'S HORRIBLE!!!
    *shoots at squirrls with gun*

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  48. um....lol...?


    how in hells name did the subject get on to octopus raping?



    ...:/ you know what...don't even try and tell me...



    So, first thing i want to say is THIS STORY IS GORRAM THRILLIN'! You are a master of your ways, Leo. A MASTER.


    Eating crispy creams in the hot afternoon Australian sun with a bucket-load of awesome fan-fics...life doesn't get better than this :P

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  49. am i dead now???

    wow a lot of comments so i take it you dont want mine :D

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  50. http://florenceblackblogs.blogspot.com/2010/10/not-finished-yet-but-here-is-leo-sparks.html#comments


    leo i posted it for you and you never looked...

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  51. Wait, i already said that didn't i?

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